Wizards are mighty.

Chapter 235 Complete Book

(In fact, the whole book is in the third chapter of this volume)

Q version of Vic thought for a moment and continued.

"The beginning of the war here can be described in more detail to reflect the sea people's determination to resist and their combat capabilities."

“At the same time, the story of the new master targeting Sean is quite thrilling and full of dangers.”

“The fact that the maid wanted to help but was blocked was also very reasonable, which could reflect the conspiracy and contradictions of our side. The plot of Sean being promoted to master level in desperate situation was a key point in the whole story. We could describe in detail the process and feelings of the promotion, as well as Sean’s improvement in strength after the promotion.”

"At the same time, the plot of the two of them joining forces to kill the master of the sea tribe and the leader who tried to stop them is reasonable and can reflect their strength and courage. The plot of dividing the spoils should also be described in more detail, including the types of spoils, their value, and how they are distributed, and at the same time, it can also prepare for the follow-up."

"Daily, lasting 450 years, reflecting the respected status of the master, reaching level 32, deciphering clues, and exploring the ruins with everyone."

450 years of daily life can reflect the passage of time and Sean’s growth, and the master’s respected status can also be described through some specific examples. "

"For example, how they are treated in society and how much people respect them."

“The upgrade to level 32 should be particularly detailed, including the feelings of upgrading, the key to breakthrough, etc. The plots of deciphering clues and exploring ruins can also increase the fantasy and fun of these experiences.”

"All members entered the ruins, broke through the levels one after another, obtained treasures, entered the center, found a valuable treasure (energy core), and fought each other. In the end, only Sean and the leader were left. The maid blew herself up and severely injured her, and Sean killed her with all his strength."

"The plot of entering the ruins here can be described in more detail. The plot of breaking through levels and obtaining treasures can further demonstrate the wisdom and strength of the team. The plot of entering the center and discovering the treasure is a key point in the whole process. The appearance, function, value, etc. of the treasure should be described in detail."

“The scenes of fighting each other are exciting and can also show the greed and cruelty of human nature. The scene where only Sean and the captain are left at the end can also reflect Sean’s strength and courage.”

“The scene where the maid blew herself up and severely injured him could also describe her self-sacrifice and strength in more detail, and the scene where Sean killed him with all his strength could show Sean’s great strength and determination.”

"Repair, obtain treasures, leave, and head to the northern continent. I plan to find a small country and become a strong protector of the country."

"Well... this revised plot can explain the physical and mental states of the team members in more detail, and the plot of obtaining the treasure can describe in more detail how to keep and use the treasure."

“It can be said to be quite perfect.”

Q version of Vic said it in one breath, and then let out a long sigh of relief.

"How is it? What does the higher narrative layer say?"

The imaginary Vic and the real Vic turned around and looked at each other.

Soon afterwards, a line of glowing small words appeared on the Book of the World.

“Just finish reading the last paragraph.”

……

After seeing this line, Vic breathed a sigh of relief.

"Great, it's finally over."

"Come on, keep going."

Q version of Vic nodded silently, without any more nonsense, and continued to pick up the Book of the World in his hand and read it.

"While traveling in the northern continent, he encountered a prince who wanted to start a rebellion. Sean invested in him and promoted him to the official level. After the promotion, Sean forced him to sign a contract."

"This is quite interesting, and it adds a new twist to Sean's journey."

“Meeting an ambitious prince is a classic setting, and Sean’s investment behavior gives the story a direction to develop. However, more descriptions of the prince’s personality and the reasons for his rebellion can be given here, so that high-dimensional observers can better understand Sean’s motivation for investment and why he was forced to sign a contract after his promotion, which can make the plot richer.”

"Sean and the maid helped him seize power, and then became a powerful defender of the country."

"Then it was daily life, which lasted for 1500 years. Sean reached level 37."

"Well, I think the span of 1500 years is too long. We can choose to expand on some important nodes, otherwise it will appear monotonous." "If we skip too many, high-dimensional observers may feel that Sean's growth is too abrupt. If we choose to expand, we can also write some specific details about Sean's emotional changes, interpersonal relationship development, and strength improvement during this long period of time."

"The Fox of Destiny was born into the Fox Tribe. Through prophecy, he learned that Sean had the opportunity to make his tribe strong, so he led several masters and official levels to hunt Sean down, and used the feathers of the filthy bird to cancel the prince's contract. The prince rebelled and put the masters and official levels into the gate of the abyss."

"At this moment, Sean is inside collecting materials."

“The plot is complex and interesting. The setting of the Fox of Destiny adds a lot of fantasy, and using the feather to cancel the contract is quite clever, which accurately triggers new conflicts.”

"But we should pay attention to explaining each link clearly. For example, the origin and function of the Filthy Bird Feather can be mentioned appropriately to make everything more reasonable."

"After being wounded, Sean fled into a smaller dimension. The other party was guarding the door. Sean planned to escape and succeeded. The Fox of Destiny saw that the situation was hopeless, so he surrendered to Sean."

"My evaluation of this is that Sean was injured and fled to the small plane, and then planned his escape. This is a very meaningful part. It describes in detail Sean's state after being injured, the environment of the small plane, and the cleverness of the escape plan. In addition, the surrender of the Fox of Destiny can also show its ability to judge the situation."

"Xion was angry and retaliated, then forced him to sign a contract, used him and threatened him, and after eliminating the hidden dangers, led his tribe into a small plane, etc."

After saying this, Q version of Vic breathed a sigh of relief.

"How is it? Is this the end?"

He looked at Vic and the illusory Vic who seemed to be doing nothing and asked directly.

"Almost. In theory, it should be so."

The illusory Vic took the Book of the World and then flipped to the last page.

Before this, he had tried to flip to the end in one breath, but found that he couldn't do it no matter what.

It was as if the pages of this strange book were infinite.

No matter what, there is always more and different content.

Only now, when the Q version of Vic has completed what "the creator in the higher narrative level" has instructed him to do, the book can be said to have its last page in the true sense.

But isn’t this ending also a new beginning?

With this thought in mind, Vic suddenly raised his head.

Everything around me has become nothingness at this moment.

With the help of the "author", the other two have each gone to a new world.

And he is about to get his final destination.

"Well, is it coming?"

Vic opened his hands and narrowed his eyes.

During this time, he could feel that the attention of higher-level narratives focused on him was decreasing.

It's not just because of what they did before.

Rather, it is due to some effort made by the "author" at a higher narrative level.

"bring it on!"

Vic took a deep breath and focused completely on his own mind.