The Martial God of the Marvel World

Chapters 265 to 287 have been revised

Chapters 265 to 287 have been revised
Today in the reader group, a reader said that the big fight at the end should have been the climax, but he felt nothing after watching it.

I reviewed it again and felt that it was indeed not good enough. The dialogues were not powerful enough, there was no momentum, and there was not the blood-boiling feeling that you get during a battle.

So today I revised Chapters 265 to 287.

Make the lines more powerful, the momentum more sufficient, and the battle scenes more exciting.

If you are interested, you can watch it again without re-subscribing.

Some have more modifications, some have less.

Basically, the original chapter was 2000 words, and after revision it was at least 2200 words, and at most more than 2800 words.

I did a rough count and found that I wrote at least 5000 more words as an apology to everyone.

In the past, in order to reach 10,000 pages a day, I rushed to finish the manuscript every day. Indeed, there were many places that were not detailed enough. If you think there is something wrong, you can point it out in the chapter review or short comment, or you can join the reader group and express your personal opinion.

As long as what you say makes sense, I will definitely make corrections carefully.

(End of this chapter)

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