Full-time Mage: I am Mo Fan's sister

Chapter 594: Black Face (Revised, skip directly)
Mo Fan's face darkened. This woman's brain was not very clear. Although he was very moved, he should not say such things in front of his sister.

Gu Jian's face also darkened. Damn it, he should stop chasing after this woman. She would sell herself out so easily?

Then in the future, you should sell yourself casually instead of selling yourself to others and counting money for them.

Moreover, he felt unhappy when he saw Ai Tutu throwing herself into Mo Fan's arms. The girl he was just about to pursue threw herself into another man's arms. It was simply unbelievable.

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Don't ask why it's like this, just ask why it's been overhauled (﹏ )
Many friends complained about this part of the plot, so Qing Ya learned from its mistakes and decided to overhaul it. Of course, a lot of the plot had to be deleted, so it can no longer be complete, so this is the only way.

Now I am short of a lot of words, I need at least a thousand words to send it out, yes, yes, I am just padding the word count now. (blatantly)
Oh, I’m going to continue reading novel—words from Xiaoyue.

Book friends Q&A: As for why the modification, emmmm
Q: Doesn’t the author plan to make some changes?

When I just read it for the second time, I found that chapters 587 and 588 are very discouraging. The beginning of chapter 589 also reminded me why these three chapters were not decided. It feels like it is not at all like the original. Ai Jiangtu even planned to kill someone. It really discouraged me. I now regret deciding all of them. I skipped these three chapters when I first read it, but now I haven't skipped them. Everything else is pretty good. Why is this section so good? The three views were all good before, but why are they so bad here? This Ai Tutu is really disgusting. Go and see it for yourself. It's really disgusting. These three chapters are really easy to discourage. I skipped them the first time and it was not bad. Now I have ordered all of them and read them for the second time. It's really disgusting. It's really disgusting. There's nothing to say except disgusting. Doesn't the author plan to change it? Mo Fan was playing in the school competition and got a ticket. Ai Tutu used his name to play. He lost and was scolded by his teammates. The protagonist asked Mo Fan to beat the person who scolded her. In chapter 589, Ai Tutu's brother wanted to kill the person who scolded her sister. Forget it. I skipped these three chapters. The rest is okay.

Question: Can it be changed? Please change it. When I recommended it to someone else, he saw these three pictures and scolded me. I want to ask, is this plot important to the subsequent development?
Answer: It was indeed planned originally. At that time, I was actually preparing for Ancient Capital, so I didn't pay much attention to this aspect and I just wrote it without thinking too much. Then, I actually wanted to show the change in the sister's personality, because there will be a big transformation and foreshadowing in the holy plane, but it seems to have been abandoned because it was said that this transformation was not good and someone stopped it. I had already realized that there might be a problem here, but I had already written several drafts of Ancient Capital before, and I was reluctant to delete them, so this happened. Well, anyway, I am very sorry!

It’s okay, just keep writing well, I read the rest of the novel and it’s quite good.

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Some friends have left me messages like this before, but I was so focused on saving the manuscript that I copied the original plot. Actually, I was planning to make it different, but I don’t know why I forgot.
It's all Qing Ya's fault!!! I won't do this again.
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